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Molly
When the purple pink blossoms pirouette in the soft, warm breeze
Lambs frolic in the lush emerald fields
When the birds start to chirp a melody chorus
Trees adorn into their silky leaves as they turn their heads to the sunlight
The sense of happiness embraces the land
Spring paints a portrait for us.
Evie
Relief snakes through the rusted grass
Love blossoms adorn the trees
A tinge of pink runs through the one who smelt the rose.
The white skirt flows over the brightest flowers.
The sun caresses the silk petals dancing on the wind.
Lambs frolic under the sapphire sky.
New life.
Conal
Embracing the land
Warmth fills life with joy
Banishing winter
Fed up with darkness.
The sun scorching the petals
Creeping up their backs
Letting them rise
Releasing their joy.
Children frolicking in the heat
Blossoms holding their trees
Like a never-ending friendship.
Spring has arrived.
Madoka
A blossom blooms
Adorning the bare trees
Opening a path of new life
A calm aroma
Drifts in the breeze.
Refreshing our souls
Bringing a tear to my eye
A petal pirouettes.
The sound of birds
Fill my heart
Leaving me with joy
And nothing else.
Nature has a power
Something that can only be felt
Only with a pure, true heart.
Luci
The icy chill discintegrates
And a stream of golden warmth blooms
Kowhai warms the peaceful trees
As blossom adorns botanical gardens.
A smile appears on a child's face
And sends happiness to others
Freshly mown grass's aroma drifts through
The sunlight.
Butterflys dart through the open sky
Crickets leap from leaf to leaf
Daffodils rise
The sun creeps up their lush green spine.
Evelyn
Leaves transform from dusty brown to an emerald green
Wilting flowers turn and rise
Shadows stretch across the sun-kissed ground
Waves lap over a beach spiraled with spring treasures.
Smiles quickly spread across children's faces
As the sun comes from her hiding place
Laughing buzzes around the lambs, frolicking in the grass
The wind whispers
"Spring, spring."

Catherine
A blanket of warmth caresses the new born
Lambs frolic through the wilting flowers
As an aroma lingers above.
The dim grey clouds disappear
And become sapphire blue
The bird's voice forces the winter's wind
To cower.
Daffodils awaken capturing the sun's rays
This is the beginning of a new life.
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