Monday, 13 May 2013

Leaf Attack!

Check out Ms Saxon's motivation for our poems this morning!



The Lonely Trees
Evelyn

Autumn is invading
Peeking through the ajar door
Dancing leaves abandon the limbs of their summer companions.

Spinning, spiraling, pirouetting
Floating down from the naked trees
The golden age has begun.

The trees sob along with the rain
"Where have my leafy friends gone?"
Scattered on the floor, the leaves listen.

A huge gust of wind
Terrorises the lonely trees
Left in the darkness
With nothing. 

 http://images.pictureshunt.com/pics/b/black_and_white_oak_tree-11909.jpg


Revenge
Holly

Unexpected chuckles
Chorus through the air
Trees blush
Showing off their leaves
The fight begins.

I track down my predator
Ready to strike
A shadow
Hiding behind a tree trunk.

I throw
Just as a gust of wind blows in my direction
The shadow disappears
I plunge into darkness.

   http://lavieboston.files.wordpress.com/2009/09/blowing-leaves.jpg

Colour
Baxter

Screams of terror
Evil laughter
Trees are cackling
Preparing their secret weapons.

Whispering leaves chattering
Escaping from the cage.

Leaves spread out like patchwork blankets.

http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs26/f/2011/070/6/6/66631e7cdf90613cfafe4b9ac17dc95a-d5nrzz.jpg


Autumn Fun
Luci

The unexpected arrives
Laughter fills the air
Leaves are frolicking down off the trees
Spiraling down like a propeller
Making a path.

Leaves crackling, chattering under my feet
If only I could understand
The language of leaves.  

http://soul-amp.com/pics/pics_to_post_autum_in_wi/Autumn_Leaves_in_Motion_Sunrise_Sunset_Wisconsin_2008_Photo_03__soul-amp.jpg


Unexpected Fun
Rosie

Screams of delight fill the air,
Intruding the eerie silence
Leaves seized by gnarled hands.
Billowing through the trees
Scorching the sky,
The golden chaos begins...

 Leaves ready by my side,
Hungry for attack,
Flailing for freedom.

Plunged through the air
Colliding with soft lips,
Spluttering,
Choking,
Oblivious to the fact
That something,
Someone had appeared behind them... 

 http://kita.no.sapo.pt/autumntree.jpg


Autumn Awakes
Conal

Screams of delight fill the air
A fury of golden fire dances
Down my spine.

Trees cower
Blushing with anger
Harmless to the leaves
Watching.

Nature's clock chiming
Swallowing summer
Chaos cries out
Waiting, waiting.

The door creaks open
The entrance
Seizing her chance
Autumn awakes. 

http://www.yourpurposeguide.com/sites/default/files/door_ajar.jpg


The Fun of Chaos
Lyndon

As the blushed leaves spiral down
Hitting the floor
Creatures below notice
The weather upon them.

Now the morning appears
And people come out
The throwing of leaves across the battlefield
Laughter and squeals of chaos in the air.

But the next season if awaiting to its avenge. 

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1 comment:

  1. These are great poems and I love all the descriptive language!
    Rach (Rosie's Mum)

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